Tuesday, June 3, 2008 - 03:05
**Write your poetry**
Write any type of poetry, even can be about bsb if you want it too. It's the "Creative Corner". 
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FRENCH:
La lune de complètement, jets un regard par les rideaux, et danses sur mon plancher. Des lueurs de fierté, et gloire à l'intérieur, il est placé au centre dans un cauchemar qui allume le ciel.
ENGLISH:
The moon of completion, jets a glance by the curtains, and dances on my floor. Gleams of pride, and glory inside, it is placed in the center in a nightmare which lights the sky
-KiTTY-
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A ring of the bell
A knock on the door
I take a deep breath
My heart beats more
He’s standing there
Sparkling eyes
A rose in hands
Temperatures rise
He touches my heart
Invades my mind
His kisses are sweet
He’s one of a kind
We walk together
Hands held tight
Love takes over
And I surrender the fight
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oh loubie...how well dat sums up my mood for d day.but is it sumthing about d day or is it just coincidence??
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Heres my latest effort...a little sad but its how I was feeling today!!
LOST LOVE
Shadows descend
Heart beats slow
Darkness grows
Images flow
Broken dreams
Shattered hearts
Eyes that cry
As love departs
Face the world
All alone
Friends and lovers
Forever gone
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Loved that Kitty
BTW nice to have you back!! 
Shanky that was very good i loved it!!
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Preety good Kitty & Lousie.
let me give another try:
(Them,Their & They = The Backstreet Boys)
Lightly,O lightly,we bear them along,
We sway like a flower in the wind of their song;
They skim like birds on the foam of a stream,
They float lke a laugh from the lips of a dream.
Gaily,O gaily we glide as they sing,
We bear them along like pearls on a string.
Softly,O softly we bear them along,
We hang like stars in the dew of their songs;
They spring like a beam on the brow of a crowd,
They fall like tears from the eyes of a cloud.
Lightly,O lightly we glide as they sing,
We bear them along like pearls on a string.
At last its done.How's that?
I think Kamran won't have any problem with this,
Or else i will have to set a drift on a memory bliss.lol...
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This day, the new today
Morals are questioned,
Authority is overtaken
In the eyes of the beholder,
You said i was right,
I smiled with all delight.
Though deep inside, tonight.
Tension runs thicker,
The connection is stronger
Without a doubt, i still love you
But what will you do about her?
The one that stands by the door,
She says she loves you, you say your in love with me
Could it be your sick in your own way,
To use a girl for her car, and then go on your merry day
And to promise once you've recieved your job,
All is gone, and we've begun.
Oh what a crazy web life weaves. lol
Hey i can still get back online!!! ^-^ Just not with my beloved laptop. Siiiigh
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=KittY=
We`re gonna miss you!!!!!!!!!!!
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carpe diem
Hey im not going to be able to come online. I have to take this laptop back to rentacenter on monday, soo that's another two weeks, no technology. I may not make it, i love computers. *siiiiighs* So on that note until then i'll be on as often as i can! Keep this forum alive!! ^-^ Take care of it for me
. Anyways, here's what i have for tonight; well i actually can't think of anything, i'm really tired, it's really late, and i really should be sleeping, i got to go to wake up at 5:30. 
... goodnight!
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=KittY=
Thanks!If you have myspace we can talk there too.My url is http://www.myspace.com/unmistakablecristina
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carpe diem
Wow i like that chrisy...really good
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Louise,I love your poem and I think I really feel the same right nowIt`s like you`ve read my mind some how!Kitty I`m glad that you`re not mad `cause here is like the place where we can talk!So...Kitty do you like the song?Oh... I saw today(yesterday `cause is already 12:30AM) I saw on the CNN about Clinton `exit from the presidential race and that she goes for Obama now! I think that he will be the next president of USA!
God had painted this earth with us,
With you and me...and they!
He had painted our lifes with
Dreams and hope and friends!
The colours are just perfect
For us to...be.
The lights and shadows
Makes us breath...
God is the perfect painter
For all of us...
And I`m so thankfull being part
Of His amazing painting!
This is more like ...simple thought not much of a poem! I don`t really write poems but thoughts...
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carpe diem
I’ll never be free
From the thoughts in my head
They are with me all times
Even when I’m in bed
They forever spin
Making my mind choke
Things from the past
Are really no joke
I want to leave the past behind
Enter my future with a smile
I want to live my life happy
Not live in denial
Its time to go forward
With a smile on my face
To find my happiness
I’m ready for the race
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Hey hey, i'm not mad at all. That's how it works here actually. lol. It's not graffiti at all. I enjoyed reading everything though, ha. I actually did too. Well it's 1:30am here, and it is time for me to go to sleeep. Goodnight! I'll write something tomorrow
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=KittY=
u rite!
kitty c "there's us" lol
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lol she might...but at least we posted some poetry tonight!!! hehe
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good nite ladies!!!!
sweet dreamzzzzzzz!!!! lol kitty's gonna kill us.
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as long as there'll be music they'll be coming back agaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin
Night Chrisy!! Sleeeeeeep well!
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Let`s go to bed!Good night,Louise!I`m so tired and lasy!
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carpe diem
yesssss????
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LOUISE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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carpe diem
I think i`ll go to bed!bye and good sleep in the morning!
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carpe diem
Im lagging behind its 10.25 here!! lol
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nopes i did not meet him in india!also i got weekends off.so i work mon-fri.8-5 but nites. lol!
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No. In India!here is 12AM and at6 AM I have to go to see my dad! and i`m pretty tired from last night and from today cause i had a hard day! but i can sleep! you work every night?have no night off?
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carpe diem
sure he must be!its 2:30am here.n do u mean meeting here on d forum??
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I think shanky is sleeping.You guys met each other?
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carpe diem
oh thank you soooooooo much both of you!
dat is surely sum motivation so i will wait for shanky to join in so i can write sum more. lol shanky!
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Kamran I already said I like it! I was on Brian`s myspace page!
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carpe diem
Bsbno1 both yours and shankys are really good...they both made me smile
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n me??? lol
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Aww thanks guys
Ya know id never been creative before i came on this forum!!!
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n mine???
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as long as there'll be music they'll be coming back agaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin
I love your poem Louise!
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carpe diem
gud one loubie!
also chrisy i'll put up sum more wen shanky comes in.real fun he is!
n sorry i was pretty busy today but i will surely hear it over d weekend.i promise!
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as long as there'll be music they'll be coming back agaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin
Heres my try!
When my heart gives up
When its time to forget
When pain makes me cry
And Im full of regret
I turn to you for help
To make me smile again
Youre my light in the dark
My shelter in the rain
You make me dance
You make me feel
With you in my life
Everything is real
You bring me to life
My heart you touch
I need your fire
I love you so much
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Well done shanky!Well,Kamran...I like it!put some more both of you!Kamran,you like the song?
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carpe diem
i can call it good
or i can call it bad
if i say the truth
you will feel bad
as it is u say
i always make you mad
so u took d effort
n dat makes me glad
oh did i write one myself
how was that? lol
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as long as there'll be music they'll be coming back agaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin
After a long conversation of Christina & Kamran somebody is here to write a poetry
Let me give it a try.Here I go:
I can call you my guiding star,
or I can call you my blooming flower.
I can call you my shining night,
or I can call you my flying kite.
I can call you my chocolate cream,
or I can call you my biggest dream.
I can call you my singing toys,
or I can call you The Backstreet Boys.
How was this.
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Good Night Chrisy n thnx! lol kitty!
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Here I am
Rocking like a hurycane
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carpe diem